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Monaco: 1929 (Box art version 4)

Sun, 02/01/2015 - 16:24 — Maritoe
Monaco: 1929 (Box art version 4)

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Looks good. The colors are

Soulfinger - 02/04/2015 - 19:27

Looks good. The colors are appealing. The wheel placement is much improved. Smoke is still out of place though, not stylized like the rest.

To Soulfinger

Maritoe - 02/13/2015 - 07:57

I'm probably going to try and put less detail in the smoke and see how that looks, maybe without the small white parts and instead just the outline.

Disclaimer: I am not an art

IcePeddlerGames - 02/02/2015 - 22:36

Disclaimer: I am not an art guy. I know nothing of color schemes. Take every piece of feedback I give with a grain of salt. With that being said ..

I had trouble identifying the smoke until the third iteration, and then I really had to look at it which isn't necessarily a bad thing.

I really like the way you have done the wheels. I had trouble telling what was going on in previous iterations.

I like this one as well, but

Dagar - 02/02/2015 - 10:51

I like this one as well, but I think identifying the smoke was easy enough. the difficult part was (and still is, I think, though now it is impossible for me to 'unsee' it) seeing that the rear wheel is flying away.

To Dagar

Maritoe - 02/13/2015 - 07:55

Sorry for the slow reply, I've been a tad busy past couple of weeks.

Maybe I could have the wheel rolling along the ground or that sort of thing?

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