Hello! I'm still new here so I hope I am doing it right... To the topic!
I am currently working on cards and rules for my newest game, Mishmash: Galaxy, a game about Sci-Fi Tropes and Cliches with mild retro vibe. There are two types of cards in the game - Technology Cards representing classic techs and gadgets every Sci-Fi setting needs and Substance Cards, resources to complete making the technologies, named after popular materials and made-belief substances in various Sci-Fi settings.
Thing is, as much as I try to keep my English clean and easy to comprehend, it's not my native language, and keeping a good, clear wording on the cards /and/ in the rules is quite a struggle as my feedback already indicated.
Here is the Google Drive file with both Technology and Substance cards:
https://docs.google.com/spreadsheets/d/1WvP62-7iztd5HOadC-ItdSPm2JUjpYH1...
And here is the file with rules:
https://docs.google.com/document/d/1qlgu2WtPTL8bF84LL_EFYuO-zEb6ZWIg7iDJ...
I'd appreciate any help - proofreading, hints, advice, what to spell out better ... Thanks in advance :)
