Hello everyone,
My game "The Market at Kos" has been updated and reposted on the web. Check it out, print it out, and play it. Let me know how it goes and ask me if you have any questions.
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Comments
The Market at Kos
You use the phrase 'agora board' once which seems obsolete.
The brown and black on the worker tokens are awfully similar.
In the components section, I'd probably combine the board and maps and just show the map. Then I'd move the board illustration down closer to scoring as a sort of example of play.
Just what I needed.
Thanks for the suggestions. It is good to get some straight forward opinion from the outside. I have fixed the first problem (it was supposed to say stalls board). And I think I fixed the second problem (I actually had a different shade of brown in the mechant tokens that was lighter so I changed the workers to that colour). The third suggestion is great and thank you for it. I will correct that later as I am short on time right now. Thanks again.