Hey guys. It's been a long, looooong time since I posted here.
Long story short I made my prototype for RED, a game I've been working on for a while now on and off. I'd like it if you guys could review my old rulebook and give me some feedback on what works and what doesn't work.
Rulebook
http://mattywthompson.tumblr.com/post/105966908511/the-rulebook-for-one-...
I stopped working on it a while after I found work as a graphics designer, but lately I've been wanting to revisit it. Not only do I want to give it a more professional presentation, I want to remake it from the ground up.
After giving it a once over these are some things to keep in mind.
-Chaining mechanic and Mana stat are being removed.
-Action system is being reworked.
-Movement is being reworked.
Any feedback you could give me would be greatly appreciated. Please feel free to ask any questions too. Thanks!
New Character sketches
http://67.media.tumblr.com/bd511a9e743d1eb21b41eaa39006eb2e/tumblr_ocq2a...
(Links to past posts for context)
http://www.bgdf.com/forum/game-creation/mechanics/need-help-rules-mechanics
http://www.bgdf.com/forum/game-creation/theme-design/need-help-art-direc...