Hi i read the rules really amazing looking like fun ..
City of the Wolves // Need some help on several issues // All FR cards and rules v3.2 online now ! !
Hey. The game looks cool. And nice job on the rules and the cards. The diagram for the set up at the end is a nice, and important touch to the rule book. If I can make a couple, perhaps nit-picky suggestions... 1. I suggest you change the age range to read "For ages 10 and up" or "Best for ages 10+." I think that reads better. And 2. more broadly, I find that rule books with significant numbers of images and visual examples are the easiest to comprehend. Whenever a type of card is mentioned in the rules, for example your "City Cards," I think adding nice visual example of a City Card in the text is very reader friendly. Otherwise the reader will have to keep refering to the components, to identify the card you are talking about. Also, including visuals makes it easy for readers to skim over the rules, get a jist of the game, and determine if they are interested in reading the rules more thoroughly. Just a bunch of text will put off a lot of busy folks. That being said, this is of course a prototype, and if it is still possibly subject to significant changes, you don't want to put a ton of time into each draft of the rules only to have to go back and redo them over and over again.
It looks very cool though. PS. What font did you use for the title in the rules. I like it. Good choice.
Exciting news from France and abroad !
Several groups will be playtesting the game in the next days !
I know it means a lot of tweaking/fixing/balancing work for me to come, but I'm very happy (and grateful too !)