hi guys, trying to reboot a idea i had on kickstarter....warchu

Part two

Okay, so I did find your draft rule book hidden in the page. I already described why it’s more important than that.

Rule book issues:

“Customizable” does not mean you can’t lay down rules. Pick a starting army configuration, for example.

How can I play this with 500 figs? That’s crazy. I’m probably not buying 500. You’re not really selling 500. And how in earth am I managing a turn where I have 500 guys to move? Or even the ~80 you’re selling in the ks? If you had a game with the 14, with clear rules, that would be much better. Where guys have complex stats, you want to limit the number of things to manage and have a system where tactical and strategic play can emerge. Do you have that? I can’t tell.

Stats. Why are some stats “lower is better”. Very confusing and counter intuitive to me. Most games don’t favor a low strength.

I need dice to play this? But you don’t include them???

hidden.... in the 3 FAQ's.
For any one else, curious. Here is the link:
https://drive.google.com/file/d/0B9870erwkOl4MGdvajVVSG92Q28/view?usp=sh...

Some comments on the rule book:

Unit Cards
Higher is better? It is intriguing that you also include lower is better. But maybe, you can simplify that table.
The head of the last column could be "When better?". And simply say, high, low.
You have missed moral.

Overall, I like that you included this to the manual. It gives players a head start on picking their units.

Battlefield setup
Fix the pages?

Move
10 degrees?
As in..
http://etc.usf.edu/clipart/42000/42001/pro_10_42001_lg.gif
Please no. Don't do that to children.
Keep it grid like: Triangle, Square, Hexagon or Octagon.
I think that Square fits your game the best. With Octagon for experienced players.
If you need more info of what I mean, feel free to ask.

Turning parts of direction like 45 degrees or so, can consume one movement point. Something like that is easier for players then having a difference between 10 degrees and 10 to 360 degrees.

6+
I am familiar with the 6+. I have those a lot as well. But I simply say that there is no need to roll there where 6 are displayed. I often talk about 6/6th chance, which is 100% a hit. Players understand better that way that they don't need to roll.
We are talking about d6, right?

Many empty pages
Try to combine a couple.

Overall rulebook
I really get the impression that your game is not done yet. This regarding rules. So I doubt that you have play tested your game. Let alone, blind play test. I wonder what all those people got.
So, did you return the money to the people who didn't get any from your game?

Reasons to why not to play your game
Brick wars.

Also.

Brick wars.

Sorry if I came over as being harsh here. I remember having had comments on this game before. But back then, I thought that you where going to do your own style of miniatures.
Most people think, lego. When seeing those figures. And I know, that there is lego out there without the lego symbol. As long as you keep the lego style. You will have trouble selling the game. In fact, I think that smarter people might try out your rules with their own lego.
There is no need for them to get your pieces, is there?

12d6 is my highest roll allowed at the moment. I assumed he had 10d6 since that is what is included in the box.
But dice rolls have to be "brainless" as much as possible. No weird tables and such that tell you if rolls are 4+ or 5+ etc per individual opponent.

All dice need to suffer in the same way.

KISS is preferred.