This thread is for the proofreading of the rough copy rules for my first game design; First Ascent: Canadian Rockies.
Please find the file in Google Doc format.
https://docs.google.com/document/d/1AXrL0odjoMio-F6Nbb7emXU0VjIZzKOfsoFO...
Looking forward to the comments and discussion!
Thanks for your time,
Andrew
The only comment I had was about "discarding three (3) equipment cards"... It seems a little *harsh*! So I was just thinking maybe it should only be two (2) equipment cards.
Playtesting will determine the best amount... That's the only point in the game that "sticks out" for me.
Best of luck with your game!
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Playtesting will determine the best amount... That's the only point in the game that "sticks out" for me.
Best of luck with your game!
Thanks so much for reading the rules!
Its an interesting point, I've been considering the difference between the 3 equipment vs 2 equipment discard. Some friends have said it is a rather steep cost as well. I will be exploring the 2 equipment discard during some playtesting this weekend.
thanks again.