Bushido The Card Game Box Back

My first impression is that the font you've chosen, while thematic, is very hard to read. I'm not sure how large a box this is going to be, but assuming it's a small-box game, the text is going to be completely illegible from any distance past right in front of your face.

My second thought was that the design is very static. I think it's because of the card pictures. Most game boxes I can think of (and that show up in a GIS) show the components either in play or in a more dynamic composition. Your neatly aligned grid seems very stolid in comparison.

Third (and please don't think I'm just trying to pile on, these are just my honest critiques), A Samurai, push-your-luck, set collection strategy game is quit a list of descriptors. Maybe pick two (A Samurai themed push-your-luck game) and mention the other aspects later in your description. Also, strategy game may be redundant/unnecessary.

Fourth (sorry, they keep coming as I write and look), I don't know if I've ever seen the box listed as one of the components unless the box was specifically used as part of the game. It's a small thing, but it caught me as odd when I noticed it.