Critical Limit: A high intensity skydiving race!

I have a skydiving game too! Creatively, it's called "Skydive!" (not that creative) It's not actually too much like yours as it is a pattern creation type game. Like yours, it's in the early stages, but it's not too bad. :)

It is here:
http://www.justbecausegames.com/index.html

I even created an Android app for the game to act as a timer:
https://play.google.com/apps/testing/com.justbecausegames.skydive

If you would like to try it, that would be great! I will print out yours today!

I'll have a chance to play over the weekend, but for now I've just been able to look at the rules and player board. I'd suggest the following:

- On the Player Board add the text, "Minimum of 1," in the description of the Box Position ability. This prevents a player from diving with no risk if their roll is exceptionally low.

- I really like the idea of making this a simultaneous-turn game, where players make their choice secretly and reveal them all at the same time. This keeps everyone involved in each roll of the dice, and wonder what the other divers are thinking.

Each player would choose a card with 1, 2, or 3 listed on it, and reveal simultaneously. Roll 1 die, resolve it, and issue points to those who chose 1 die. Only resolve the second and third dice if players have chosen those longer dives, issuing points at the end of die resolution.

- I suggest you switch completely to d4s. This makes it riskier for those who want to go for a longer dive. It will also increase the abilities of players over time, as their first few dives will be used to build up their ability scores, then they'll feel more confident that they can tackle riskier dives later in the game. There's still a chance of a low roll when it comes to rolling 3 dice, but overall the numbers will be higher.

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Looks like a quick, interesting push-your-luck game! I'll have a go at it this weekend and see the way ability scores affect how the game goes.