Crazy Commute rule book feedback

Sheeptree,

I am going through your rule book now. As I go I will write down initial thoughts.

-I like the cover art (the driver/raging bull feel is good)
-Gain the most points through "dueling" is an interesting way to put it- a tad confusing. Personally, I know what you mean, but it is awkward.
-Good pictures/explanations of cards
-I like the driver who got their license goes first rule :)
-I like the example set-up: very helpful
-Good rule explanation so far, and the event rule in red helps it stand out.
-Dueling now makes sense. Perhaps dueling should be in quotation marks above to signify importance to the game.
-Example of play is good. Good idea in having the names of the characters color coded.

Overall, good work. Are you interested in reading through our first rulebook? It is not fancy like yours, only a simple word document. How will you be making the game?

-Austin

Rather than "If you have drawn an event card" instead When you draw an event card
seems more right.

I am not clear of the move forward one spot and other positional directions especially given you don't have actual race track. Maybe a little diagram for that- also how much space to allow on the table. Also not clear on example of play Werewolf discards one card- he doesn't have to do that right- just he doesn't want that card.

Also the characters do they have different mechanics personality? It would be good if the manual was in text (image at the moment) so I could copy and paste individual small edits suggested.

https://docs.google.com/document/d/18qQVEGm101i11N7QuX63G7sYGnhmzl9gt8Ah...